Tuesday 27 May 2014

Dora and the tsunami a story for room2

Dora was looking for a sea shells lifting rocks to check for a shiny big claim then out of the water came Boots with a frowned face.

"Olá" Dora said."Boots what's the matter?"

"I was playing in the sea and the sea ran away"replied Boots.

So Dora decided to take a look at sea.Studying the Ocean Dora swiftly found the problem. Suddenly there whose a rumbling noise falling to ground Dora sprigged into action. Reaching for Boots hand Dora yelled "tsunami!" Boots was shocked. Tsunami? Before Dora could explain. Everyone was screaming and running then Boots had a magnificent idea. "Dora" shouted Boots. No matter how loud Boots yelled Dora couldn't hear him. Ripping his hand free Boots ran up a little hill. Steering down at the shore Boots estimated 5 minutes before the title wave hit. Then with a big voice he yell to the people "In 4 minutes the wave will hit". Boots stopped for dramatic effect. "Now everybody we have a chances to Survive". The village stopped everybody steered at the monkey as if he was the king. "We need to get to higher ground". So they followed Boots up to the mountain. The people watched there once great village crumbled us the wave hit the shore.

Walking thought the wrecking was like walking thought a dump yard. Then Dora said "come on everyone let's get going". Everybody worked together to clean and clear the wasteland. Lead by a monkey and his will to save the town. In a week everything was back to normal. The town celebrated for there past and for the future.



2 comments:

  1. I liked the descriptive words and the adjectives next time use some sentence starters

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