Tuesday 18 November 2014

Hiwi the kiwi story

There was a stormy night and there were no fish in the sea. Eru and I were fishing for a long time. Out of the blue we caught a whopper but it looked pregnant so we put it back.

"What now?" Said Eru but he was shortly cut off by a huge wave as it fall on us. I quickly grabbed my other flare. Bang! As the Waka got destroyed. Floating up I realised that life jackets work. The ray of sun woke me up.

"Where am i ?"my dry mouth croaked out. there was all the remans of the  ship everywhere but no sign of Eru. I walked along the sandy beach but I can't find him. All most about to give up when I found footsteps so I fooled them and there he was muching  on a banana. "Hey!" I said as eru looked at me "Got any more bananas?". The wind started to pick up. We looked up and there it was the rescue crew in a helicopter. I grabbed the other flare and shot it we were safe and happy to be alive.

Monday 10 November 2014

Sentence starters

Diogue                    

"Move lady get out the way!" the man grunted as he slammed on the breaks. Out of no where a heroic man spear tackled her to safety. He was tall, old,smelt bad and looked like a hobo. Her croaky voice managed to thank the poor man he didn't  replie. He stared walking away the woman offered  him money but he won't take it.

Action

He quickly hide the drugs before he got caught. The Police ask if he had any but the man said

"What are you talking about?".

Problem

The man ate at the restaurant but when he had to pay he left his money at home. He got thrown out of the restaurant.